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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #63 on: August 14, 2010, 08:46:13 am »

*like*
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #62 on: August 12, 2010, 01:47:43 am »

Night of many thoughts. And sharp memories. One of them hit me. This is couple of months old. Almost a year by now.


To drown in ice

I wanna look forward to fall into your arms again
Come home and get a kiss
As routine as it seems
Being caressed to sleep full of lightgreen dreams
Being so proud that you’re my man

Too much is told – we crossed too many lines
My tears are sold
For cheapest crimes
And all those lies
And hidden smiles
And pointless tries
And eyes,
Your eyes…
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #61 on: March 02, 2010, 07:32:14 am »

hmm Kremik said that or something when we had a discussion about rhymes and rytmics. I cant properly remember... you know through one ear in, through other out :D
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #60 on: March 01, 2010, 11:05:15 pm »

What doesn't make it poetry? ;)
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #59 on: January 06, 2010, 11:04:27 pm »

Its a little bit of something I wrote tonight. Not exatly a poetry... but still.

We are blood brothers


and I stake your heart for making me bleed
we are no longer, and I want you to weep

as you made me, you swore to be
my father to protect
my brother in arms
my childe to love

blood brothers - we are running through the night
beyond good and evil, showing no fright

as you made me, my maker you shall be
I will follow
I will bow to your whim
till you release me

now the chance to be is gone forever more
its your choice, and the blood is spilling on the floor
« Last Edit: January 06, 2010, 11:07:16 pm by Melian »
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #58 on: February 20, 2009, 09:42:12 am »

The beginning is pretty good and then the third verse is visibly weeker... ain't it worth looking over an working on it?
But I never do that, so... :D

However I do like the end, even though it doesn't follow the perfectly started rhymes from the beginning.
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #57 on: February 19, 2009, 11:41:20 pm »

Not a double post, I swear ;) This is part 1 of my new mini-series....

Seven Deadly Sins

Sin no.1: Pride


Pride is the mother of all sins
In arrogant heart she always wins
With head held high she looks down on
Upon those who are not ones of her own

She hurts the most her loyal peers
With gaze of hatred ignores their tears
Conceited children of the new world
Are firmly grasped in merciless hold

Lies and deceit, part of my life
Shame on my head for being proud
I don't need help, won't share burdens
That is my pride and my offense

Prideful heart hurts itself, that is known fact
Sometimes, though, pride is the only thing left
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #56 on: January 20, 2009, 11:35:03 am »

My newest brainchild, kind of bittersweet

Three Years Later

No longer do I see your face
On every man I pass in streets
Once again you have changed my life
Took away part of my beliefs

I cannot believe anymore
In everlasting miracles
In love that spans eternity
And is not free of the shackles

That bond that once was created
Was always seen only by me
No, you weren't blind, it was my fault
I saw what I wanted to see

I realize it's too late now
To say sorry and take it back
Though I did mean just this one thing:
The love for you I'll never lack

I should now close the door to past
Stop tearing raw my heart's old scars
It's three years later and I know
That given time all hurts will pass
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #55 on: August 25, 2008, 11:18:21 pm »

Now, I wrote a Tolkien lyric. I dont know if it is any good and I am not sure with some wording. But please correct me if I did something wrong. Thank you.

Turgon’s lament
by Melian


Silence everywhere
No one dares to speak
In fear of my wrath
My violence to come
I shall be swift in my revenge
I swear

But now I only see you
So weak
Yet, in past so radiant
Sitting by your side
In this unfortunate hour
Oh Aredhel, oh my sister sweet
I weep

Is it you?
I cannot tell
My eyes are clouded with tears
You lie dead
The bed in your room is empty and cold
Fire there, burns no more

Foolish, so foolish I was to let you go
The madness of the elf who would now deny me
What I had deemed right
What I have accomplished fades away
Only grieve remains
And behind grieve silently anger creeps into my veins

It simmers, roars, burns
With every raged breath I take
It grows and blooms
To the fullest
The strength of it frightens me
Nevertheless, I welcome it with open arms

You, husband, killer, sinner
You, kin slayer, betrayer of my trust
Now listen what I say
As my word is law
And the law will be fulfilled to the end

Your hands are red with blood
Your words are poison
Don’t you dare to threaten or to plead
You will see your undoing
Into the jaws of Caragdûr you will be cast

I will destroy you, even if it would be the last thing I ever do.


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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #54 on: July 02, 2008, 05:28:35 pm »

Hello everyone, I wrote two poems this time, so enjoy...

Moonlight Girl

She is a moonlight girl without a face
She's never seen, she's never heard
Death follows where she goes under the moon
Her song is heard when you listen

She is a moonlight girl without a soul
She sings a lullaby all the night long
Siren without a voice, just a small girl
She lost her way and she doesn't care

She is a moonlight girl without a smile
Searching for loneliness, is that a crime?
Blood marks her passage and those that she met
Can't tell you about her, they are all dead

Moonlight girl lacking a face, soul and smile
She likes to pretend that she's still alive
Normalcy no longer means anything
Only blood in the night when moon's shining

She is a moonlight girl, so be careful
She feasts on nights when the moon's full


Shattered

When calling out in despair
her soul can smile no more
and jester in her heart dies
she faces blank mirror.

Cracked face of innocence
laughs gaily back at her.
Reaching to grasp that mirage
she cuts her empty hands.

Living has always hurt,
dying kept scaring her
and facade she showed world
hid what was never there.

Courage is needed to live well
to speak one's mind and show you care.
Only a coward runs away
but she is me and I am afraid.

Into these poems I put my heart,
the only way I can freely speak.
The pain never lessens and I hurt
but I like to feel that I'm shattered.
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #53 on: June 17, 2008, 09:16:51 pm »

Oh damn you... you are wonderfull... I want to be that good
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #52 on: June 17, 2008, 06:49:18 pm »

Looking forward  ;)
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #51 on: June 17, 2008, 05:15:10 pm »

thank you!
There are more songs but we will see when we will put them up on myspace... I will post here then :)
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #50 on: June 17, 2008, 10:53:37 am »

Yeah, they're really good  :thumbsup: great voice.
Actually I like the Cleaners more, even with the German, but the lyrics of Good Night Tale are better  :)

Now let's hear the other two  :D

Okaay... so it's gettin better and better.... Leaving the ghosts behind is amazing :bow:
And Ustura too. I like the beginning very much, and the atmosphere, though it continues in rather... whats the proper word... repeating way, that it's a little all the same.

Damn, you're good :)
« Last Edit: June 17, 2008, 11:05:00 am by Lothmíril »
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Re: English Poems [ENG]
« Reply #49 on: June 16, 2008, 07:19:01 pm »

OK Melian ... you asked for it :P

The other two songs on the myspace-page, then...

this one is about chess, castles and an old terrible relationship of mine :)

LEAVING THE GHOSTS BEHIND (music: Asmodean and Celegorm, words: Celegorm)

In the hallway there is a table
My life is mirrored black and white
I don’t know whether I’ve been able
To move the pieces into the light

I came to an angel
I’ll be leaving a ghost

This iron castle is dark inside
I know that it made me blind
It has taken me some time
To leave the ghosts behind

But lately I have grown stronger
And my life is only mine
I won’t stay here any longer
I’ll leave the ghosts behind

I move my knight in a new direction
A manoeuvre you have never seen
I am no bishop of perfection
But now threat the silver queen

And in the hallway there is water,
And the water covers your floor
And I’ll be gone with the water
As soon as you open your door

I lost the game here every evening
In the mirror I saw a fool
But to win a game is easy
If you’re the one who sets the rules

I throw back the table and raise my arms
Clear my throat and loose my tie
If for once you will listen
I bid you a last goodbye

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Ustura (Music: Celegorm & Asmodean; words: Celegorm)

Give an hour to behold the canvas
Feel the surface against your hand
Breathing in the oil and incense
Taking off to a foreign land

Hiding in yourself a while
Drawn into the pictures lines
See the walls of the museum
Disappear like drifting sand

And these symbols seem familiar
Haven‘t you heard these words before?
And something inside of you is calling
A hunger beckoning for more

Old lost stories from distant ages
Gushing up from an ancient jar
Close your eyes to find yourself
Heading for the morning star

Hear a distant cracking sound
Almost like a whispered phrase
Then the cold museum floor
Draws you back to where you are



Comment: "Ustura" means "story" in arabic - at least we were told so...
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