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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #33 on: January 30, 2008, 10:20:59 am »

its... beautiful....
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #32 on: January 30, 2008, 08:27:07 am »

Swan

This is my last song before death
To stop my blood it is too late
The life is running away fast
I never thought this love would last

The hope falls down with burning wings
The life used to be free of sins
Then heart turned traitor to the mind
And peace of soul was hard to find

Yet, what wise men of past had said
Seemed to be truth I now accept
'Tis better to love and to lose
Than never feel a thing for you

Beautiful melody I sing
A requiem I am composing
Mourning for myself, love and life
I promise to let go and die

My time was used, short as it was
My love was used, my greatest loss
My life was used, to amuse all
My heart beat slow, hear the bell toll

For even though this magnificent bird sings the most beautifully as she dies, the fact remains she dies alone...
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #31 on: November 19, 2007, 08:23:55 pm »

My muse suddenly decided she likes English for poems, after all. Who am I to argue?

I am

I am the unreal dream
I am the eigth deadly sin
I am nightmare of the day
I am lonely heart hunter

I am what you desire most
I am yours, just pay the cost
I am a thief of the souls
I am here, to you I'm close

I am silence in the night
I am doing what is right
I am hope reincarnated
I am punishment expected

I am angel heaven sent
I am devil repentent
I am all you'll ever have
I am here for you to save

I am speaking empty words
I am coward on the loose
I am still the girl in waiting
I am essence of the hunting

I am virtue personified
I am goddes in a disguise
I am source of eternity
I am lost in insanity

I am me and I am you
I am mine and I am yours
I am all and I am nothing
I am asleep in my coffin

I am buried with my dreams
I am caught without release
I am gone and quite insane
I am asking: Who I am?
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #30 on: November 14, 2007, 09:42:57 pm »

All right, this is the first poem in English I have finished, I usually write in Slovak.

Unrequited

I'm walking down the path of anguish
The path of unrequited love
My heart's been broken, crushed and stamped on
And no one's going to put it right

I desired your recognition
For you to see me as a woman
A woman hoping to find love
And have the pleasure of your touch

Now all of my wishes unfullfilled
Are lying trampled in the dust
Splash of my tears is the only sound
That pervades corners of my soul

The soul is battered
Lost its battle
Locked itself in a dank, dark cage
With heart as its fellow prisoner

I used to have a resolve once
Resolve to speak, to speak my mind
To tell you the truth of what's in my heart
But time has passed and it didn't last

Love tastes bitter on my tongue
Only empty words spilling out
I cannot trust you with myself
Craven is who I truly am

"Love me, please," I want to beg
"How have you been?" I say instead
A fleeting smile for any friend
Is given and then taken back

Behind the mask of friend I hurt
Behind my eyes the love is cruel
Behind my words the promise broken
Unrequited love is never spoken
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #29 on: October 23, 2007, 09:06:12 pm »

It's always safer to take things as compliments ;)
but yes it was meant that way.
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #28 on: October 23, 2007, 08:49:56 pm »

So Loth I dont know if I should take the second sentence as a compliment or not :D

But thank you.
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #27 on: October 23, 2007, 07:18:21 pm »

I adore the way you end your poems.

And I would not dare to comment a poem like this from the so-called artistic point of view...
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #26 on: October 22, 2007, 11:44:10 am »

A teraz ja zase nieco smutne :(
vacsinou sa snazim pisat zo zivota... takze vsetky moje basne su v jednom alebo druhom smere osobne.

Why is it
by Melian

Why is it? Why is it I feel so down?
Desperate, wondering
Feeling sadly alone.

I want to feel warmer now
I don’t want to be sad
I want to take care and think
Everything will be great

Why is it? Why is it my heart so breaks?
I am here lonely now
Fearing the next day

I want to be held
Warm arms around me
Whispering of lover’s breath
Soothing lovingly

Why is it? Why is it that I broke these bonds?
Which held him and me?
Together for these several months.

The time was so bitter sweet
Everything changed.
I do not want to be trampled
By his little games.

So why is it that I cannot really breathe?
These games of love, torturing me
And letting me without sleep.

Because there are always two who bear the guilt of love.
« Last Edit: October 22, 2007, 11:46:23 am by Melian »
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #25 on: October 21, 2007, 10:29:01 pm »

speaking of experiments. ospravedlnujem sa za dlzku. som...celkom zvedava, co mi na nu poviete  :-[

Farewell to dreams


The end.


...empty.
The waves are flowing over my body,
Examining every inch of my skin
And leaving glittering drops.
Their coldness doesn’t touch me at all.
Sunshine burns,
My scars are getting dry.

Resignation

After all the passion and fire
The storm of your eyes and my memories
The painful desire
Of basic instincts
The hunter and the prey –

I…surrender.
I don’t have the strength.
Not anymore.

Misery / Circle


I’ve put so much effort into repressing the feelings
That have been a mirror of love
I wish I could drown you in the sea of tears
That I’ve cried for you
And walk around clad in dress made of your skin
Winning over you at last.
But I know that if I satisfied
My hunger for your pain
Then all the others would deserve their own revenge
Sworn on me.
Endless game…

Silence

The music of water fades away
Remembrance
Of simple presence
Eternity locked in one repeating day.
Numb
Lost
Blind
Alone.
Haunted…
Until the silent echo of my dreams
Finally disappears.

Wakening

The end.
Although I know
It ended nights ago.


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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #24 on: September 29, 2007, 10:28:46 pm »

Nooo, Loth, netvrdil by som ze je to nejako extremne nezrozumitelne, hovori to pomerne dost (teda aspon mne to povedalo a co mi to povedalo, do toho nikoho nic). Moc pekna basnicka, depresivna, no o to krajsia.
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #23 on: September 29, 2007, 10:12:37 pm »

A pri niektorych basnach, ktore su naozaj osobne, je mi tak tridsat, ako by ich ohodnotil nejaky profik, pretoze pre mna su jedinecne.

Mno, dost bolo pokecu. Nieco pridavam. Je to sice jedna z kategorie osobnych, ale je to zaroven straaasne nepochopitelne :) a aj tak som ju uz zverejnila :) mne sa na nej paci ta posledna sloha.
Posted on: September 29, 2007, 09:09:05 PM
Find me the heaven I’ve been so long looking for
Show me the unknown beauties of this world
No there’s no other there’s nowhere to go
Just tell me everything not saying a word

Kill me
Free me
Save me
Forget me


The voice of pain will open my eyes
The shiver I feel inside when I lie
Listen to darkness how dearly it cries
Light up the emotion and then let it die

Kiss me
Free me
Save me
Forget me


Devil desires rule my bleeding soul
Endless patterns of single yes and no
Sneaking memories about heart’s little role
Say anything say lies say it isn’t so

Kiss me
Fire me
Save me
Forget me


Unbelievable how slowly passed one day
Accept my fall with an angelic grace
Choose the side and never start to play
Hold me tight and take me out of time and space

Kiss me
Fire me
Sate me
Forget me


Erasing all the crimes and sins of past
They said it won’t hurt but help me it does
Wish for a night of love that would last
Hell knows what made you give me your trust
Tears wet my eyes when I think of us

Kill me
Free me
Save me
Forgive me

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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #22 on: September 29, 2007, 10:02:42 pm »

Ono myslim, ze dobre pise ten, kto pise od srdca a kto sa trafi do vkusu co najvacsieho poctu ludi. Kazdemu sa paci nieco ine sice, ale da sa to. A komu sa nepaci styl ako pisem, nech si to necha pre seba, alebo ako povedal kedysi klasik  :gandalf:: ,,Komu se to nelibi, at mi klobouk polibi."
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #21 on: September 29, 2007, 09:37:47 pm »

Definuj dobru basen. Moze byt, ze sa mi podari napist dobru basen raz za zivot, a bude v anglictine, pretoze som sa vypisovala cely zivot v slovencine a postupne presla do anglictiny.
Moj pripad to nie je, ja pisem asi tak v 4roch jazykoch :P

Skor by som to uz zhrnula, ze clovek, ktory nevie napisat aspon priemernu basen, tak ma uplne jedno v akom jazyku.

ale poezia je strasne, strasne subjektivna... a krehka... a neda sa podla mna urcit, ci niekto "vie" alebo "nevie" pisat dobre, pretoze niekedy sa to skratka podari a niekedy nie...
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #20 on: September 29, 2007, 07:12:37 pm »

My piseme aj po slovensky samozrejme, ale vacsinu mojich basni nemozem publikovat, lebo su moc osobne, ale mam aj take, ktore by sa dali. Vidim to na druhu temu o basniach ...  :D :ring:
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Re: Básne v AJ
« Reply #19 on: September 29, 2007, 06:50:39 pm »

tak a teraz poviem jeden velmi podivny a podla niekoho mozno obmedzeny, ale moj nazor
 
 myslim si, ze clovek, ktory nevie napisat aspon priemernu basen vo svojom rodnom jazyku, v zivote nenapise dobru basen v jazyku cudzom.

a tymto vyrokom nijak nehodnotim tu publikovane basne. len vyjadrujem svoj nazor na tvorbu v cudzich jazykoch
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